Peer Reviews 

Peer feedback on this mock: 

+ The lips are really good as are the nails. 

-  Change the font of the white text, or size of the blue text in order to make the difference noticeable. 

+Masthead is sweet. 

- Fill the bottom right a bit more. 

+ Good colour schemes, I like the way they all match. 

-  Fill some of the blank spaces. 

I did feel that before I got my peer reviews I should add more to my magazine front cover. I'd like to add some festival logos underneath the 'festival guide' sell line and maybe a competition on the bottom right. I am overall happy with my peer reviews as they have said they liked the things that took me quite a long time and I was most proud of (masthead, nails and lips). I don't think I want to change the white text font however I will make the sell line titles a bit bigger and try and do what I can to sufficiently separate them.